Monday 17 January 2011

8x2 - Lesson 4 - Agrarian vs. Industrial

Read and watch the full version of Slough by Betjeman: Homework posted below.



Slough

Come friendly bombs and fall on Slough!
It isn't fit for humans now,
There isn't grass to graze a cow.
Swarm over, Death!

Come, bombs and blow to smithereens
Those air -conditioned, bright canteens,
Tinned fruit, tinned meat, tinned milk, tinned beans,
Tinned minds, tinned breath.

Mess up the mess they call a town-
A house for ninety-seven down
And once a week a half a crown
For twenty years.

And get that man with double chin
Who'll always cheat and always win,
Who washes his repulsive skin
In women's tears:

And smash his desk of polished oak
And smash his hands so used to stroke
And stop his boring dirty joke
And make him yell.

But spare the bald young clerks who add
The profits of the stinking cad;
It's not their fault that they are mad,
They've tasted Hell.

It's not their fault they do not know
The birdsong from the radio,
It's not their fault they often go To Maidenhead

And talk of sport and makes of cars
In various bogus-Tudor bars
And daren't look up and see the stars
But belch instead.

In labour-saving homes, with care
Their wives frizz out peroxide hair
And dry it in synthetic air
And paint their nails.

Come, friendly bombs and fall on Slough
To get it ready for the plough.
The cabbages are coming now;
The earth exhales.

For your homework you are to practice writing a P.E.E. paragraph to answer the question:

Is Daffodils by Wordsworth an agrarian idyll or a poem about industrialism?


or


How does Betjeman feel about modern Britain?



Look under the poem (below) for further help.




Daffodils by William Wordsworth

I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
A poet could not but be gay,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed--and gazed--but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:

For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.


Remember:

Step 1 - Point: Write a full sentence that answers the question:

Write: 'The poem Daffodils by William Wordsworth is ... '

Step 2 - Evidence: How do you know the answer? Find a part of the poem which back up your 'point'. Remember to use "quotation marks".

Step 3 - Explain (1): What does the quotation show? Write: 'This shows...' and use interesting vocabulary (you can look in a Thesaurus, or press Shift+F7 in Word)

Step 4 - Explain (2): Pick two key words and explain them further - what do they show? What do they make you think of? Write: 'The word "..." shows...'


POST YOUR P.E.E. AS A COMMENT ON THE BLOG BY FRIDAY 21st JAN.


p.s. - a treat:

15 comments:

  1. POINT the dafodils by william wordsworth a poem in the agrarian it says "I wandered lonely as a cloud
    EVIDENCE That floats on high o'er vales and hills" "hills" shows that it is in the because there are more hills in the country than in the city.

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  2. Cameron Aldridge 8x218 January 2011 at 09:00

    the poem daffodiles by william wordsworth is an agrarian idyll:
    "That floats on high o'er vales and hills" This shows that he is hovering and perched up in the sky.the words "vales and hills" suggest that it is in countryside because there is not many vales and hills in the city.

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  3. KATIE GROSE 8X2

    The poem 'daffodils' by William Wordsworth is a 'agrarian idyll'.
    "beside the lade, beneath the tree" suggests that it is a calm peaceful place of nature, where he/you can relax and hear nature speaking.
    The words "beneath the tree" shows us that he is under a tree, and it is a peaceful place tto rest and enjoy.

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  4. The poem daffodils by william wordworth is a agrarian idyll."beside the lake,beneath the tree"suggests that it is in the contryside because there ar not many lakes in the city.

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  5. The poem daffodils by william wordsworth.
    'Beside the lake, beneath the tree' implies that there is an open peaceful space as it tells you there is no noise, just complete still, silence. The words 'beside the lake' tells us that he is beside an open lake, with complete silence, so he can rest and respect.

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  6. the poem daffodils by 'william wordworth' is a agrarian idyll.
    'beside the lake,beneath the tree' suggests that he feels happy and calm where he is currently. he likes his nature and feels peacefully to be there. the words 'beside the lake' tells us that he is sitting next to a open lake with silence and can rest and may can hear the animals sqeeuling and making noises.
    'beneath the tree' suggest that he is sitting under a tree and can rest peacefully instead of stressing of some stuff. this mwans this is in the countryside because there isnt any lakes usally in the city. also this means that it isnt in the city and there is loads of noises of cars and people talking.
    By Ashma Ali 8x2

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  7. oscar baldwin (ozzy)20 January 2011 at 05:39

    the poem slough is a industrial idyll ''come friendly bombs fall on slough'' surggest that it is in the city because bombs rarely fall on the country side

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  8. Betjeman is annoyed and disgusted with what the world has become.

    “Come friendly bombs and fall on Slough!”

    This shows that Betjeman doesn’t like modern Britain because he wants Slough destroyed. The adjective “friendly” shows that he wants Slough blown to smithereens.

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  9. Amie Warner 8x2

    The poem Daffodils by william wordsworth is an agrarian idyll.
    "fluttereing and dancing in the breeze"
    This suggests that it is gental and peaceful area.
    The word "fluttering" suggests that the daffodils are moving slowing and lightly, almost as though they are flying.
    The word "breeze" suggests that there is a light, gental wind, creating a calming and peaceful scene.

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  10. The poem “Daffodils” by Wordsworth is an agrarian. “The waves beside them danced; but they, out did the sparkling waves in glee” this shows that this is a happy picture and that it’s all friendly and nice which shows that it’s agrarian because he isn’t moaning about his life (which is what you do if your talking about industrial). As well showing that he is happy about this life, he is also showing the description of the water which gives a good feeling. Which agrarian poems give! “Sparkling waves” these show that the water is magical, beautiful and make you think of a lovely beach with hot twinkling water that you paddle in with your whole family, all together and all happy.

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  11. the poem daffodils by wordswort is agarian. words in the poem show that its a calm and peaceful poem, ' sparkly waves' show that the water is magical and beautiful. 'beneath the tree' suggest that he is sitting under a tree and can rest peacefully instead of stressing of some stuff. this mwans this is in the countryside because there isnt any lakes usally in the city.

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  12. Daffodils by Wordsworth is a agrarian because of the words it uses

    point:"A host, of golden daffodils
    Beside the lake, beneath the trees"

    evidence: this show that it is near a lake witch are normally in the country-side.

    "Fluttering and dancing in the breeze" witch i take it is in an open space so the breeze can get to them.

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  13. The poem daffodils is a agraian idyll as it is about the country side.

    "Beside the lake, beneath the trees"

    This shows that it is out in the open with trees and a lake.In the middle of the city you somtimes see ponds but not as many lakes as in the country. Also the word "breeze" means that it is open to the wind but in cities you have sky scrapers and they block the wind a bit.

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  14. Georgia Tagg 8X221 January 2011 at 08:11

    The poem 'daffodils' by William Wordsworth is a 'agrarian idyll'.

    "beside the lake, beneath the tree" suggests that it is a calm peaceful place.

    the pharase "beside the lake" sugests that it is in the country and it is calm and a place to chill/relax.

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